Wednesday, September 29, 2010

Blog 10

Blog 10:write 1-2 paragraphs defining “Nobodiness.” Analyze and explain 1-2 particular causes of feeling like a “nobody.” You will use this writing tomorrow to analyze/revise your own sentence variety

     As the two minute bell rings, I walk slowly, stretching out my neck to spot friends, or even acquaintances. No one is around so i continue to walk alone. I feel vulnerable, open, and easily judged as my tan flip flops thump..thump...thump...on my way to my next class. This is simple nobodiness, or alone-ness, a feeling that comes when walking, driving, or all around being alone. It is a feeling of emptiness, and a small amount of fear. Fear of being alone.
     Another type of nobodiness involves most people personally, this is a feeling inside, not just being alone, but truly feeling unrelatable, unwanted, and a bitter feeling of being misunderstood. A feeling that, for me, came hand in hand with my father's death. After he passed away, I felt like none of my friends or teachers could relate, or truly understand how i felt inside. I felt very alone, and had a true sense of nobodiness.
    

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